LyricalBombs's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Crystal Spume [Trancecore]]

Ah.

Pretty nice :) Only change you could make is alternating the melodies some more. It seemed like the same notes kept being played throughout the song. Otherwise, great song. 9/10, 5/5.

[We Come From The ****ing WS]

Well...

It was okay, good flow and beat and whatnot, but it doesn't use its full potential. You say it's just a test, so okay, but if you ever decide to redo it, just don't leave the beat running solo for so long. Maybe add some rapping, or sample something. I suggest Juicy (Notorious BIG). The following would sound good in this song I think...

"It was all a dream, I used to read WordUp magazine. Salt 'n' Pepa and Heavy D up in the limousine..."

And however much else you'd want to put it in. Either way, send me a message when you redo it. I want to hear it :)

booyadiaz responds:

Sure Thing. :)

[Escape to Sanctuary]

Eh.

Very pretty piece man! How long did it take? And for your first orchestral piece, it was even better :)

T1LTED responds:

Thanks! It took me about 8 hours total.

[RMP - Tired Of It]

Oh come on!

It was so good, except for the vocals sound like you're clenching the whole time you're rapping. It's good, but the vocals are...strained I guess.

I'll check out your other stuff though.

4/5 8/10

[Instantaneous - Dj Oros]

Decent

Not perfect you know, I didn't really like the phaser it had. I've never heard Fire Bird so I couldn't compare it, but it had OK instrument selections and halfway catch melodies.

Somewhat mediocre though. It's a very forgettable song. It sounded not bad, but it could have done with MORE instruments and MORE melodies. It was repetitive, and that's one of the worst flaws to have in your music. It sounded like you used an FL Studio riff machine and repeated the same riff over and over again.

Nothing special, but not bad.

8/10, 3/5.

-LyricalBombs

DjOros responds:

I appreciate the feedback :)

I agree with the repetativeness, Id like to add a little more but by the time I had finished with the filter and soundgoodizer and the bass etc, there was very very little room to add other instruments. At 4 and a half minutes long, if I had added much more to the length of it, it would not only sound congested and too long/boring. This was one of those beats you cant really add much to, and I let it rest as is.

Thanks though :)
~Dj Oros

[Maniacs]

Very Nice!!!

Very good rapping, and something that was especially attractive about it was the background melody. It sounded great, like something you'd definitely hear on the radio. Maybe you should be? Well anyway, the only thing I can really criticize you on would be the lyrics. Some of the lyrics sounded kind of repetitive, like you'd said them before.

The BEST part about this song is the intro. Perfect, couldn't have made it any better, which is the main reason you're getting 10/10 and 5/5...and favorited.

-LyricalBombs

[Christmas Time (Here at Last)]

Wow

Funny. I'm pretty sure this goes against Christianity...which is my belief...but it's still funny/catchy, so I won't judge you. Nice 3rd verse too, haha. Stoning a jew.

9/10 and 4/5

P.S. Jesus DOES love you :)

P.S.S. Easter is when Jesus was resurrected and ascended to heaven.

SpiderPigClock responds:

Haha, don't mean to blaspheme. I consider myself Christian... to an extent. Thank you for the review.