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Well...

It was okay, good flow and beat and whatnot, but it doesn't use its full potential. You say it's just a test, so okay, but if you ever decide to redo it, just don't leave the beat running solo for so long. Maybe add some rapping, or sample something. I suggest Juicy (Notorious BIG). The following would sound good in this song I think...

"It was all a dream, I used to read WordUp magazine. Salt 'n' Pepa and Heavy D up in the limousine..."

And however much else you'd want to put it in. Either way, send me a message when you redo it. I want to hear it :)

booyadiaz responds:

Sure Thing. :)

Eh.

Very pretty piece man! How long did it take? And for your first orchestral piece, it was even better :)

T1LTED responds:

Thanks! It took me about 8 hours total.

Decent

Not perfect you know, I didn't really like the phaser it had. I've never heard Fire Bird so I couldn't compare it, but it had OK instrument selections and halfway catch melodies.

Somewhat mediocre though. It's a very forgettable song. It sounded not bad, but it could have done with MORE instruments and MORE melodies. It was repetitive, and that's one of the worst flaws to have in your music. It sounded like you used an FL Studio riff machine and repeated the same riff over and over again.

Nothing special, but not bad.

8/10, 3/5.

-LyricalBombs

DjOros responds:

I appreciate the feedback :)

I agree with the repetativeness, Id like to add a little more but by the time I had finished with the filter and soundgoodizer and the bass etc, there was very very little room to add other instruments. At 4 and a half minutes long, if I had added much more to the length of it, it would not only sound congested and too long/boring. This was one of those beats you cant really add much to, and I let it rest as is.

Thanks though :)
~Dj Oros

Alright,

let's see. The main problem about this song is the reversed instruments. While the piano has a clear, fresh feeling to it, the reversed instruments are...actually kind of aggravating. They make you mad that you can hear the nice piano. I'll admit, it started off great, but the reversed instruments sounded what you'd call dirty, while the piano was clean. They sound great separate, but together they just sound bad. Not a good song, man, sorry.

Remember what I said though, dirty and clean don't mix well. When you're making a song, try to avoid a fusion unless you KNOW it's GREAT. Otherwise, they sound best separated. To make this song better, I would take the reversed instrument (whatever it is) and either turn it into some sort of well-mixed piano, or make it techno sounding and change the piano to some sort of saw, then turn the tempo up to however it sounds good.

I tried to be as constructive as I could, so sorry if you're disappointed with the review.

4/10 and 2/5.

Keep trying,

-LyricalBombs

siike92 responds:

Not at all dissapointed, I value your critisim. :)

Still though, once again I must disagree with you. The reversed instrument is a piano by the way. Again, thanks for the review! Cheers :)

Pro!

It sounded professional...you aren't on the radio why??? You're good enough to get into a nice record label. Just sayin'. The lyrics are good, the beat is good, and the voices are fresh. It makes it even better that the NGAP never gets good raps.

10/10, 5/5, favorited.

-LyricalBombs

THEICONICICON responds:

THANKS DUDE i really aprreciate that you feel my work. Im workin on it for the radio and what not...i tryin to get this song on the radio....waitin on the call back...but thank you

Hello

I believe we met. Now I'll admit, this was a LOT worse than your Lame Ass Loop. Here, everything came from all over the place. It was so random. It wasn't the worst I've heard though, so I'll give you a 4/10 and a 2/5.

It started out quite well though. I like the piano melody at the beginning of the song. But then...fail. You threw some random techno melody into a piano. Hardly ever something you want to do.

-LyricalBombs

siike92 responds:

First of all sir, my Lame Ass Loop is without dispute(from anyone beside you anyway) the worst piece of music written by man. I must disagree with you about this one, I quite like it. There is no "techno melody into a piano" it's the same piano part from the beginning. I think you just don't like this style of music, most people don't. The idea is to throw things from all over the place. Make it sound glitchy and broken. Notice all the computer bleep sounds and stuff. For an example look at my track "Words(remastered)" it's a staple piece in the genre. I suppose you could call it cyberpunk. I understand if you don't like this style, but honestly I'm very happy with this track.

Wow

Funny. I'm pretty sure this goes against Christianity...which is my belief...but it's still funny/catchy, so I won't judge you. Nice 3rd verse too, haha. Stoning a jew.

9/10 and 4/5

P.S. Jesus DOES love you :)

P.S.S. Easter is when Jesus was resurrected and ascended to heaven.

SpiderPigClock responds:

Haha, don't mean to blaspheme. I consider myself Christian... to an extent. Thank you for the review.

Amazing

Wow, people don't get 10/10 and 5/5 from me often...anyways, I really can't find anything wrong with this song. I just wanted to get up and dance through the whole thing! Flawless instrument choices, flawless notes, flawless song.

5/5, 10/10, Favorited

-LyricalBombs

Falloffenix responds:

thank you!
i appreciate your response.

I hate D&B...

but this wasn't all bad. The snare (I think it was) kind of got on my nerves, and the bass sounded like it wasn't synthesized, so I'd try synthesizing it with a TS404 bassline synthesizer. It'd sound better than your bass right now.

I like the feel of the song for some reason, like something you'd play while people were walking slow (duh).

So a good effort and a pretty nice loop.

8/10 and 4/5

-LyricalBombs

iDarkBoy responds:

Yea... I admit the snare did get annoying after a while so next time I make one of these i'll change the volume. Thanks for the review though.

No offense...

But was this song a joke? Or was it for real. I'll give you some default ratings of 8 and 4 until you answer.

-LyricalBombs

Tistfree responds:

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